These week I finished revising Ch. 17 of the Nineveh book according to Jenn’s awesome critique. And something else happened. I added a new character. She gave me a great idea and I went back into my story and added three or four new scenes with a wonderful new character who is going to totally change my heroine’s journey. Thanks Jenn! My story is better because of you.
I promise you a crazed animal, a concussion, and a kiss in every single book...you're welcome!