This week I revised chapters 31, 32, 33, 34, 35, 36, 37, 38, 39, 40, and the epilogue of L.M.R. according to the helpful critique of my lovely sister. Which puts me at the end of the manuscript and finished with that edit. This revision took my story from 89,052 words to 87,757 words. So I cut quite a bit of my “overactive voice” passages out. I’ve spent so much time worrying that I didn’t have a voice and now I find out that I have too much. Who would have known? Anyway, the story is shorter and better
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